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  Written by Kim KovachSubmitted by Alesia Benedict, CPRW, JCTC
  Original Publication Source:NATIONAL BUSINESS EMPLOYMENT WEEKLY
 From the Publishers of the WALL STREET JOURNAL
 
  Jim Pallouras was a senior executive at a national 
retailer based in the Northeast when he was laid off as part of a downsizing 
last year. He'd joined the company after leaving the military, worked his way up 
the ladder and took pride in his contributions as the retailer expanded 
nationally. 
   
  When Mr. Pallouras sat down to update his resume for the 
first time in years, he was faced with the challenge of condensing a 30-year 
career full of achievements into an effective one - to two-page document. Yet, 
he remembers thinking, "How hard could it be?" 
  He started by listing every important aspect of his 
life dating back to the 1960's including every job title he'd held at his former 
employer, as well as his accomplishments from high school through the Army. When 
he was done, his resume stretched to three pages, starting with an objective 
statement and ending with his marital status.  
  Once Mr. Pallouras' resume reached employers and 
recruiters, they took one look before dropping it into the wastebasket. It was 
wordy, overdone, and out of touch with the realities of a '90s job hunt. 
Fortunately, it wasn't long before Mr. Pallouras realized his resume had 
problems. After gathering critical advice, he revised it to present a more 
competitive version of himself. The rewrite worked. His new, improved resume 
generated interviews, which led to another senior-level position. 
  Executive recruiters, professional resume writers and human 
resource managers say they've seen more poorly written resumes cross their desks 
recently than ever before. So before you waste time, money and postage with a 
resume that will eliminate you from consideration, review the following common 
mistakes to make sure you avoid them in your documents: 
  
Mistake #1: No Dates Listed 
   
  "I can understand that by leaving 
off dates, the candidate's intention may be to avoid possible age 
discrimination," says executive recruiter Edward M. Hughes, Vice President of 
Hughes & Podesla Associates in Somerville, N.J. "But most corporate recruiters 
use resumes to screen out rather than screen in candidates."
 From a recruiter's perspective, candidates eliminate recent job dates on their 
resumes for only one reason: to hide information, such as a history of 
job-hopping or a long period of unemployment. As an alternative, Mr. Hughes 
suggests focusing only on the last 10 to 15 years of your professional 
experience and using a NOTE section for older experience where dates don’t need 
to be listed
  "It's a double-edged sword," he 
says. "You want to diminish the negative and do everything you can to get an 
interview. But the people on the recruiting end tend to be myopic to the fact 
that the economy has put many well-qualified senior execs into the position of 
having to vie for fewer jobs, and you have to be somewhat sensitive to that." 
						 
  Mistake #2: Few Achievements Shown 
  The most frequent resume faux pas is 
to fill it "with unsubstantiated claims and too much industry jargon that 
doesn't sell the candidate," says Alesia Benedict, Executive Director of 
GetInterviews.com, a resume-writing firm in Rochelle Park, N.J.  
  "A resume is a marketing document 
designed to sell your skills and strengths," she says. By including and 
highlighting specific achievements that present a comprehensive picture of your 
marketability, Ms. Benedict says that you'll attract many more interview offers.  
  Mistake #3: Outdated Information 
  A glaring red flag on many resumes is job descriptions 
dating back 30 or more years. "A resume isn't your biography," says Ms. 
Benedict. Employers want to know "what you've done lately, so including 
information from the 1970s is hardly relevant and can do much more harm than 
good," she says. 
  Mistake #4: Calling Yourself a Consultant 
  Many candidates use the term 
"consultant" to describe their current work status. But unless you can quantify 
your consulting activities, recruiters and hiring managers will be skeptical.  
  "The consultant title tends to be 
death on a resume unless a specific task and result are stated and the 
consulting project is for a recognizable concern," says Steven M. Lavender, 
president of Morgan/Webber Inc., an executive search and consulting firm in 
Massapequa, N.Y.  
  Mistake #5: Irrelevant Information 
  Recruiters and HR specialists agree 
that listing personal information isn't appropriate or necessary on an executive 
resume, and including your photograph is the worst offense of all.  
  "Your resume is the one step in your 
job search over which you have total control," says Frank Fox, executive 
director of the Professional Association of Resume Writers in St. Petersburg, 
Fla. "Based on the strength of that one or two pages of information, you'll 
either be selected for an interview from among hundreds of other candidates, or 
passed over." Thus, every word you include should be meaningful and help to sell 
your skills and experience.  
  Don't Forget to Network 
  For unemployed senior-level 
executives, handing out resumes should be a full-time job. "Eighty percent of 
jobs are filled through networking, so contact absolutely everyone you know -in 
addition to head-hunters-who's in a position to hire you" or suggest others for 
you to meet, says Mr. Hughes. 
   
  "Networking can include personal 
business contacts, people you've worked for, people who worked for you but have 
moved on, vendors and sales representatives you've dealt with in the past five 
years, and even people listed in the alumni directory of your alma mater," he 
says.  
  With an impressive resume in hand you'll greatly increase 
your odds of earning a closer look. 
  
 
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